Acme
We rode the waves
our bodies bending
and flowing around
each other
Faces contorted
in the grip of
a manic emotion
hands held tight, backs rigid
Sounds lost
in the roar of sweat
roiling off our bodies
collecting on the sheets
like puddles in rocky hollows
Images flashed with
kinetic intensity
in our boiling minds
lining our every nerve ending
with wet fire, sweet and sexy
We kissed, we bit
we raked, we scratched
in a rage of love and lust
streaking along our spines
like hot lightning
The waves slid
along our slippery groins
flowed through the gaps
between our stomachs
and broke on our faces
We offered ourselves
to a different ecstasy
crashing on the shores
of orgasmic insanity
ship-wrecked and swallowed
by a surging storm of
flailing limbs and thrusting bodies
Fingernails dug
into wet skin
we clung to each other
as the world inside us
exploded-
into fragments of time
touched by eternity
January 11th, 2006 | Quote
Expertly done! Delicate, passionate and intense. “kinetic intensity”, “raked”, “surging storm of flailing limbs” - Beautiful.
Marco
November 14th, 2005 | Quote
Ô¿Ô: what a unique name you have! what does it mean? and thank you…can’t help but grin at your comment!
November 13th, 2005 | Quote
Yow! You took me to “a different ecstasy” with this piece. The closest thing to being there!
November 12th, 2005 | Quote
lorena: *smiles* thank you!
Nicole: yeah, its been a while but it is always a pleasure to have you here!
November 12th, 2005 | Quote
Oh my god, that was HOT! Havent been here a while and so glad i stopped by.
November 11th, 2005 | Quote
delicious writing :)
November 7th, 2005 | Quote
rusty & SilverMoon: thank you for your ecstatic words!
Geetanjali & transience: *smiles*
Anon: oh well you have the right to your opinion…so I respect what you have said but I wish you had the courage to comment without hiding under the ‘anonymous’ label. It is not like I’d hit you for stating what you think!
November 7th, 2005 | Quote
Dunno if you were tryin to portray the beauty in it or the vulgarity in it. In my personal opinion, I thought that the poem lost the touch of beauty in it as I went on reading.
November 6th, 2005 | Quote
the “kissing a bit” part made me tingle.
November 4th, 2005 | Quote
I do believe my fingers have been singed…
November 4th, 2005 | Quote
Your electric poem surges, giving new meaning to “body surfing” using words as a riveting roller-coaster. (I especially like the phrase “streaking along our spines like hot lightning.” That reference to the nerves permeating your entire beings sets off more than sparks. Hmmmm.
November 3rd, 2005 | Quote
Whoa ! An emotional Titanic I must say….all those exploding fragments of your fired Imagination sure caused an orgasmic Tsunami !!!