Comments on: Senses http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/ patterns of light and memory Sat, 22 Nov 2008 06:48:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.3 By: Anil http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-805 Anil Fri, 16 Dec 2005 14:51:15 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-805 Thanks everyone for your critical and appreciative feedback. Thanks everyone for your critical and appreciative feedback.

]]> By: Anonymous Poet http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-804 Anonymous Poet Fri, 16 Dec 2005 03:10:23 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-804 More elegant, contoured sensuality from you. Great writing! Especially, I like: "I taste The taste of love Like sweet strawberries In the comfortable softness Of your molten lips" Outstanding lines! More elegant, contoured sensuality from you. Great writing!

Especially, I like:

“I taste
The taste of love
Like sweet strawberries
In the comfortable softness
Of your molten lips”

Outstanding lines!

]]> By: Belle http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-803 Belle Thu, 15 Dec 2005 06:57:20 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-803 Ah, the celebrated nascent of the senses... Beautiful. Ah, the celebrated nascent of the senses…

Beautiful.

]]> By: Dan Husain http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-801 Dan Husain Thu, 15 Dec 2005 03:13:53 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-801 Very Anil like! But strawberries and molten lips are not working for me. Mull over it! Very Anil like! But strawberries and molten lips are not working for me. Mull over it!

]]> By: Mermaid http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-800 Mermaid Thu, 15 Dec 2005 01:48:49 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-800 Hey, where's touch? No, I guess that one is obvious. Vivid descriptions of the senses, Anil. Hey, where’s touch? No, I guess that one is obvious. Vivid descriptions of the senses, Anil.

]]> By: Extempore http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-797 Extempore Tue, 13 Dec 2005 19:59:17 +0000 http://arthedains.com/blog/2005/12/12/senses/#comment-797 I will, for now, suffice to say that this is indubitably one of my favouritest yet. The last stanza was so beautiful, that I cannot begin to describe my reaction to it. Anil, you make poetry seem so very effortless. I trust you see why I am saying this, dear boy. :-) p.s. I missed <i>My Generation</i> altogether for some stupid reason but I must say, it was <i>lovely</i> I will, for now, suffice to say that this is indubitably one of my favouritest yet. The last stanza was so beautiful, that I cannot begin to describe my reaction to it.

Anil, you make poetry seem so very effortless. I trust you see why I am saying this, dear boy. :-)

p.s. I missed My Generation altogether for some stupid reason but I must say, it was lovely

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